That was amazingly written. the structure and idea were flawless and creative. idunno how u find these topics and words but u def. hav a gift...and quite frankly, im not really fat, just bigger than i used to be...its just that i hav some friends with great bodies that are hard to see..im working out tho and im gonna look better! and i never have been or will be one of those girly ppl....ill get down and dirty sometimes and then i hav my weird ditzy side....i hav a very colorful; and funky style..im in love with fashion but im no hollister girl..that stuff is cute but i just went school shopping and everything looked the same..my friend and i got shirts and belts that are really cute but fun...and thx alot for the comment and shoutout, ur really great.
love ya lots,
sore

That was incredible too. It is really strong emotionally. It is sort of angry at something. Sometimes I feel that way. Just let the bad happen so it can only get better. Good work

Wow i like this one alot for some reason... its just really good...a different topic than i usually read and i love new things so this one really impressed me. and i really liked your writing style... 5/5 from me. keep it up.

Very good poem. The flow went off in some places but your words made up for it. This topic you choose was great. I also loved the way you layed out the poem and the repetition in it. 5/5

Keep up the good work!

-Shannon <3

Really nice poem... I like it :D
Keep up this good work

~ Sumit Ojha

Couldnt really concentrate on what you were saying bt other thn that perfect so i stll gave you a 5/5

Hey, amazin poem, great ideas, real talent.
comment back plz :D

Run away there is a cop
[[ I could downrate this poem for this line alone. The poem is AMAZING, save for this line. Find another rhyme, in my opinion.]]

I really, really, really love this poem of yours. I think it is actually by far your best. It's creative, the form is different, the flows wonderful, the rhyming perfect except for that one line, the message amazing.
Absolutely a wonderful job. ^^

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

I think that this poem was really strong. i really enjoyed this piece allot. Its very creative.. your best yet

A very original poem, to say the least.
By repeating words you made it into a kind of chant, the kind they sing to bewitch a person. Very special poem!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Little pyros!!!! So cool. I love the topic. This is a very creative ... the flow was great, the word choice was decent, and the concept was brilliant! 5/5

Good chant

=( this a beautiful yet sad poem. aw, jenny jenny...i just love how you can paint such a wonderful picture and yet i understand the message you are trying to send out to us.

i love you jenny ^_^ your my best friend ever.
you're so amazing at the things you do. Never change my sweet jenny ^_^.

Excellent poem well written strong message