Willow tree part 1

by Brittany Hampson   May 9, 2006


I sit under my willow tree.....
i sit crying under my willow tree....
i sit and look at the stars above....
looking for you my love....
i sit under my willow tree crying...
i cried myself to sleep...
in the morning under my willow tree i awake...
i stand up and turn around to see my body still there on the ground...
i find you my love and bring you to my willow tree and here you see me dead....
you sit next to me crying on me under my weeping willow tree....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    I like it its really good i gave it a five

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Hampson

    Thanks to anyone who comment...i'll change some things maybe...
    i have alot of people liking it the way it is

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Looking for you my love....
    ((I loved these lines..))
    ever day you come to my weeping willow tree and crying
    ((every))
    he stand there that night and crying he self to sleep...
    ((he stood there that night and cried himself to sleep..))

    Wow..Oh my f--king god... This poem is amazing. I thought, when I started reading this, 'This is a 4.0 poem..' but then I got to the end and I was captured; it's so sad! I almost cried.. Great job describing this tale. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Lovely write. Quite sad. mmhm

    5/5

    xx.Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay.xx

  • 18 years ago

    by awww

    Nice... sad but greatly written... keep it up and be strong..

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