by Kaylee May 10, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Drowning within sea of obscurity, |
by Sarah Ann
*mind blowing. lol sorry for the typo. |
by Sarah Ann
*mind blowing. lol sorry for the typo. |
by Sarah Ann
Wow the imagery in this poem is mine blowing. It was written so beautifully, I love it. It's amazing how specific things could make us ponder about life. 5/5 Keep it up and thank you for your criticism on my poetry, I made some changes. |
by Darien
Very nice poem Kaylee. I really liked the metaphors and images you brewed with your words. Very well chosen and formatted. The small things count big in the end. Keep on writing! |
O wow for being based on a television show. Great write hun. |