Aww....
this is really good, too!
i'm jealous....
5/5
Lauren

Hey darl g0od j0b 0n hits a t0uching piece very well written. thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my p0em.. meant al0t xx

lOve frOm
d0ra

Omg this is my favorite poem
thats soo sweet
...im way jelous.

Thanks for your comment. I really like this poem, it is very well written!!!

This poem was well written. good job!

I luv this poem..V cute!! I luv ur quotes u post 2!! xxxx

THiS iS SO SWEET! AWW;; THAT`S ADORABLE;; GREAT POEM!

______HiS FRiEND*

Nice poem... it is sweet and cute.. Keep being awsome cause your poems sure are!! xox

Wow, that kinda decribes summer love.... lol

loves it!

XxX
Miss LostXinXlife

Really nicely written

I'm absolutely in love with this poem!!
It's so sweet :)
And written very well.
Good job.

Excellent i liked the last stanza the most.

I really like it..

Ah! this is so adorable...i love it...!!!
really nice flow...and it paints such a pretty picture of the thrill of a summer lover! nice job, 5/5!!

Aww so cute.

there's a little tinge of sadness with the whole 'it's not true love' deal but i like it a lot!

Hiya T.L.T,
A lovely romantic story. You have expressed yourself well. In my humble opinion it could do with tweaking with, just to help it flow a bit better.
Still, great job 5/5
Michael