This poem is really well written hun, it flows nicely. 5/5

Yeah I totally agree! I can relate... well gr8t write as always! take care. Peace-Out! ^_^

Hey! Another wonderful poem! I totally get where you're coming from! GREAT JOB! 5/5 allll the way!

Much love!

Wow man this is good i remember ur earlier work as well i like this line-" i give it all.Then im no more". u fuse ur poetry with intensity. i like