Aww sheriil itz reali good!! except 4 the bit about scabs...scabs r gross u shud use anotha word!! lol hehehe newai itz still gud and u kno im alwaiz here 4 u if u need me ;p wuv u gawjuz Xx-sera__

Very sad. But good. It could be longer, But its great the way it is. Awesome job 5/5

`taleeee xx