by Darien May 10, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
This Is My Story |
by 111308
Another Great Poem By You!...Amazing 5/5 I Can So Relate To The Ups And Downs Of Life.. You Start Off Great In The Morning And Your Day Sometimes Just Ends Bad! Anyways Great Write |
by MemoirsOfMe
How stunningly sad! You kept my attention all the way through, and there wasn’t a moment it varied. I love your flow on all of your poems, it just has this beautiful essence. Great Job! |
by Shawna
This is a good poem, I don't know if I've ever read a poem about someone losing their cell phone. LOL :-) You have a different writing style!! Good job. |
by not a poet
Great way to make something so simple, so exciting! great job again! |
by ShadowDancer
I liked this line: |