This was a really good poem, and a very difficult topic to approach. I agree with you for most of the poem. Except that I also believe that justice does exist. People do get what they deserve in the end.

I disagree with the above person, I really don't think justice exists. I feel as if I never really got my justice.

Your poem, I read it earlier, was really good to me. Everything flowed well and to me at least it presented true things baout the supposed word Justice. It's a confusing topic, and hard to write about, but this was really really good.

WOW!! I have to agree with Yrene Tangerine this poem was amazing!!! You are a wonderful writer!!

"Justice has no meaning,
in fact its just a word.
When will people realize,
that life for a life is absurd."

Those just happen to be my favorite lines to!!! 5/5!!! amazing!!

Beutifully written Lis! .... I like this poem alot, cos its so true!!

Dave.x

Well written peice with an interesting and well portraye concept. i agree with most of this peem, justice does not really exist esspessially since people have such different ideas to what it means.

one point i feel that if you changed the line "Those people are surely a threat" to "Those people surely are a threat" the peice would flow better. over than that though a great well written peice.

5/5