Its rainging outside

by chris   May 10, 2006


Another shitty day
that no one will know
its raining outside
at least i think
so why should i even
try and get out of bed

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  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    What!!!
    i can't believe i actually want to cry
    honestly i can relate to this on such a level.
    for days now i have been doing nothing, just hanging around my house.
    not going out, not seeing anyone and this morning i woke up and i just thought...why?
    why should i even bother, i lay there for so long.
    my life sucks,

    but on the other hand (excuse me for life storying you, there!) i have great poems to get out of bed for!
    thank you for that.

    **smile**

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    How come it's so short? Great message your sending across though. I just think you should make it deeper. Try and explain why you don't wanna get out of bed =]