Great meaning in this one. It's hard to live when you have bad thoughts or memories in your head constantly. But again, I do think you can make this longer. Really dig into your emotions.

`taleee xx

Chris, I can relate to this poem extremly. I loved it. I go through pain every day of my life. Read my profile sometime. It is hard but I get through, because of my friends on this site I manage to seek comfort. Writing helps let me get all the pain out of my head.*Meg*

This is such a mentally mature poem
kinda makes me sad,
the true behind the statement is a scary thought.
Great poem
hope every thing works out for you.

**smile**