by Natalie
Wow. You said this wasn't good. I loved it. You really put your feelings out there. I loved this stanza; |
by Nee
Your poems are my inspiration! |
by Toni
Brilliant poem hun! I really hope the other you comes back soon, cos you really dont deserve to keep punishing yourself in that way. Can relate to this poem so well, i like the way you've written it too, its unique. just wish you didnt have to feel so much pain though. keep writing ur great at it xx |
by Jenie
O honey!!! noooooooooo go back to what u saw!! thats where u need to be!! u r too thin! u dont need to be any thinner! u r so beautiful! so perfect! please...c that this ed will make it all change into someone u dont like!! i love u! stay storng!...dont worry..this was a GREAT poem!! |
by Hayley
Hunni, i loved this poem, i liked the way u went from one point of view to another, its a great way to write it! especially when u think two different ways ! i love your poems, i've missed reading them ! missed u too! if u ever need to talk i'm always always here for you -xoxo- hayley |
by Bridgette
Aww.. I love this poem, and it really didn't make sense to me until I read your explanation & so I reread it & understood it. I loved all of it & I could definitely relate to it. Great job on this & Stay strong!! |
by Timothy r
This is so sad, and I am there with you, you are not the only one who feels this way, as I was reading this I could see myself, pretty pathetic for an old guy huh? I just wanted you to know you are not alone, Thanx, Timothy r |
by Fallen~Tears
Wow, this is such a good poem that most everyone can relate to , i loved it.. but in the third stanza you accidently put "slef harm" instead of "self harm" just thought you might wanna look into that.. sorry bout correcting you.. anyways excellent poem 5/5 |
Hi, I really liked your poem, especially because I've felt like that...sometimes I feel and see myself fat, but people tell me I'm thin, and everything's confusing. |
by Summer
You said this wasnt good & we might not get it well I got it when I read it and it left my mouth wide open in awe!!! This is one of my favorites now. |
Wow so beautifully written dont put your poems down i loved it |
by Lendell
I love it. i felt same when my lover left me. great poem 5/5 |
by Lendell
I love it. i felt same when my lover left me. great poem 5/5 |
Oh, I thought you meant that you missed someone else and that that person had left u a note or something saying that you'd gotten skinny ... oh well with explanation is a good poem :D |
by Amanda
Sabrina hunni, it's a good poem like all your work. It brought tears to my eyes because I care about you so much. i'm not doing so well myself. i'm so depressed just lately. I'll email you tomorrow after work :) |
by Bloomed Rose
Good job. man, your poems are always so sad but full of emotion. they're really good in there own way! nice. 5/5 once again |
by Tara Kay
I loved it, all your poems are aweosme because there unique and there from you. |
Thats really deep and powerful. I like how you told it in two different perspectives of yourself-That really made it unique. Amazing write--Stay Strong-- 5/5 |