by BlueDreams May 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
This then I saw this maiden fair |
by Robie Lincer
Another masterpeace! very beautifully written! i loved how you ended the poem! keep it up! |
by Lovely Bones
Wow. Great poem. I was completely captivated. I especially love the last stanza... VERY NICE!!!!! I love your poetry. |
by Bridgette
Aw that poem is so sweet. I loved it! You described everything perfectly and the rhythm and flow of it was good. My absolute favorite lines were: |
Such promises are likely to be kept..... |
by karen
I L O V E how your words all flow together. |