Hey darl a t0uchng piece beautifully written great j0b very t0uching great use 0f w0rds keep it up hun!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Great poem! Loved it and enjoyed the read.

I L O V E how your words all flow together.
*karen*

Such promises are likely to be kept.....
.......haunting and evocative.......

Aw that poem is so sweet. I loved it! You described everything perfectly and the rhythm and flow of it was good. My absolute favorite lines were:
Then gently... so softly... closer still
Our lips did warm the winter's chill
Those really stood out to me. Great job on this!

Wow. Great poem. I was completely captivated. I especially love the last stanza... VERY NICE!!!!! I love your poetry.

Another masterpeace! very beautifully written! i loved how you ended the poem! keep it up!