Comments : My first love

  • 18 years ago

    by Silver

    Awwww, sooo sweet!! I really likes this one alot!! Well written Hun!! Its so sweet and so true at the same time! lol
    -Silver

  • 18 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    Hey good poem i liked it keep writing.
    5/5
    Jay Jay

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason

    Great poem, it's my favorite of yours so far. Love is definately a very complicated feeling. Keep writing.

    -Jason

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel

    Thats is so cool I love this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel

    I dont think I am better then u.

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Omg so sweet i loved this os much pasion u realy love him awwwwwww
    thats so cute i can tell by ur style ot writing that u long together xoxroxyxox

  • 18 years ago

    by miss murder

    I love that its awesome dude seriously

  • 18 years ago

    by Lestat

    Awesome flow
    Excellent style
    Luff it
    xxx
    Lez