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Aww this poem is so sad. You did a great job at expressing your feelings and really bring out the emotions in the poem. The flow and rhythm of it held up well.. Great job on this!

I hope you're okay. This was a really emotional poem. The flow was really good. Take care!

This is such a sad and emotional poem. The cry of attention jumped out of the page, it's just so touching. Great write. 5/5

Wow nice, again such a sad poem..but it was a really great write 5/5

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