by Simon Hayes
... A feeling we've all happened to come across I'm sure. There is nothing worse than having words in your heart that you cannot utter. This poem defines that statement. A beautiful write, but please... DO TELL HIM :) |
by Cuddles
Simon, I promise nothing except that I'll try. |
Wow Mary! I really LOVED it!! It had a great flow to it, and a lot of emotion. |
Hmmm.... a tough situation to be in. And its worst when you know that you gotta let him know soooooon. Yeah, sooooo know the feeling, been there done that. Well, all I can say is that just shoot right at him, you got nothing to lose. And once you've said it, you'll see how light it feels to get it off your chest. Good luck hun! |
by Cuddles
It's in the sadness section because there's just a lot about this situtation that's laying hard on me right now. I couldn't put them in the poem. That would have made it a book. *smiles* |
by Bridgette
Great job on this.. I could really relate to it. The flow & rhythm was really good.. Great job! |
by Jessica
Wow.. that was very good, im sure everyone could probably relate to that.. and your feelings really came thru strong! keep up the excellent work! |
by Just Wishes
Don i felt that you were more talking to chatting than writing a poem. it was a bit confused . |
This Poem Reminds Me Of Me And My Current Boyfriend, I Know I'm Going To Have To Break It Off With Him Soon But Goodbye Is The Hardest Word In The English Language, Because It Hurts The Worst Expecially When You Care About Somebody The Way I Do About Him...I Can Relate & I Love Poems I Can Relate To 5/5 Definatley *Smooches* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by Tasha
This poem is cute |
by Just Wishes
Dear, |