Comments : Sickness, Wish, Solution, and salvation

  • 18 years ago

    by Ankit V Master

    Nice poem pal ,dont get so depressed.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ....It was....fine yet not exactly as great as it has the potential to be. Still it seemed to come from the heart giving it a more desperate and sad plea to the already sad undertone. Some choice phrases that stick out.
    ~Fallen