Maybe I'll see you again

by Josh   May 10, 2006


It's hard to believe
That you're really gone.
It's harder for me
To try to move on.

You left this life
So simple and pure.
and for what reason?
Even God is unsure.

You deserved none of this.
You cared for us all.
And even in bad times,
you always stood tall.

If this world has any mercy,
I'll make just one wish, my friend.
That some day, in some dream
I'll get to see you again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by sara

    WOW! You are really talented keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    That is really good.. the flow and rhythm of it was perfect and really held up well. It was very sad and you did a great job at expressing your emotions. I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by erika marie

    Wow, your very talented. this poem was beautiful. amazing work.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    This poem was very emotional and had alot of depth!! Short but to the point!! I wouldnt change a thing!!! Rhyming seemed not at all forced!! Great Flow!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Even though this poem was short, and the vocab was simple a smart move, it did have depth to the words that the whole time I was reading it I was just thinking how it had the perfect tone of sadness yet a touch of hope at the end of it.

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