Beautiful and sweet poem :-)

EXCELLENT POEM!
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Josh,
Even though it was short, it truly has to be one of the best poems I've read...Not kidding! I think i like it a lot because of the subject..if you dont mind, if i have the time, can i write a poem on the same thing lol? Just asking....I dont know when i could write it...(ton of hw) but anyways Great job!!!

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Always4You

Even though this poem was short, and the vocab was simple a smart move, it did have depth to the words that the whole time I was reading it I was just thinking how it had the perfect tone of sadness yet a touch of hope at the end of it.

This poem was very emotional and had alot of depth!! Short but to the point!! I wouldnt change a thing!!! Rhyming seemed not at all forced!! Great Flow!!! 5/5

Wow, your very talented. this poem was beautiful. amazing work.

That is really good.. the flow and rhythm of it was perfect and really held up well. It was very sad and you did a great job at expressing your emotions. I loved it!

WOW! You are really talented keep it up