by Wasted Fake Smiles May 10, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Tell me no lies, sing no sad songs, |
Excellent written, I like the Never lie to me, lies only hurt me more. It works great |
by Brigitte
Very nice poem, the main idea and your word ussage was great. Just one idea, the use of the word "Me" was used to much in your poem and it through off the flow, such as here |