Good

It was good, not one of the best i have read but still good!! Parts of it left me confused!!Rhyming seemed a bit forced. I liked the way each stanza was only two lines rather then four!! Good word choice!!!! 4/5!! Great Job!!

Aww... that is a really sweet poem and shows real compassion towards a friend. You did a great job on this. The flow and rhythm of it was really good and I loved it all. Great job!