Dont even try

by ღMőŁŀŷ ĹůvÅ¡ Ũღ   May 10, 2006


Don't even try it.
don't even dare.
its funny how sometimes
you actually act like you care.

but than when it comes
to the things that matter most
you sit and feel sorry
only for yourself.

your not the only one who's hurt.
just cause your down,
doesn't mean you have to act like this,
were all sick of the frown.

i try to be there,
i try to help.
but you just wont quit,
feeling all sorry for yourself.

why do you have to act this way?
why do you have to be so sad.
your life is perfectly normal,
you act like only yours is bad.

but its fine,
its actually really OK,
you can go and waste your life,
just kiss your days,
away.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow. that was pretty amazing.
    but it made me realize how my friend must feel. how i bring her down because i can't deal with my emotions.
    and thanks for the comment. i know i'll make it through this break-up "problem" i just don't know when.
    great poem and thanks again.
    5/5
    Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. that was amazing.. i couldn't find a single fault! brilliant! keep up the excellent work and ill keep reading it!
    jessy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I liked it so much..it was awesome..every part inside of ur poem ws really fantastic..keep up da good work..tke cre..

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I love this poem. Its like telling someone off but at the same time trying to cheer someone up...5/5

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