Comments : Dont even try

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I love this poem. Its like telling someone off but at the same time trying to cheer someone up...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I liked it so much..it was awesome..every part inside of ur poem ws really fantastic..keep up da good work..tke cre..

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. that was amazing.. i couldn't find a single fault! brilliant! keep up the excellent work and ill keep reading it!
    jessy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow. that was pretty amazing.
    but it made me realize how my friend must feel. how i bring her down because i can't deal with my emotions.
    and thanks for the comment. i know i'll make it through this break-up "problem" i just don't know when.
    great poem and thanks again.
    5/5
    Lauren