Again, some grammer mistakes. i think you would be better laying your writing out in stanzas. it hel[ps the reader and it flows a lot better... like this...

I asked you for help
But you looked at me and laughed
I think about you everyday
As i cut into my wrist...

just breaks it down a little to make it easier to read.

however, your writing is powerful and heavy and i do enjoy reading it.

keep it up hun x

This is a really good poem. I really liked it and it showed much emotion. You done a great job

Wow, I'm blown away. Really great write aside from a few grammar mistakes.