Voooh!! this is just too unique, i hvn't read anything like this at all, this has so much of sadness in it an dit has been beautifully captured with great selection of words, amazing write dear

all the best and take care
5/5

All I can say.. is this is an outstanding piece

It's very impressive indeed. It's starts so well... Very interesting poem!

This is beautifully written, every stanza stands out, so eloquent and descriptive..I love your use of imagery, the depth of emotion.Sometimes life and love do tear us apart, but hold on to even the faintest glimmer of hope for better things to come and that will see you through the roughest times.
All My Best,

GaryJ

I can relate to this:

Outside lies the armour
an illusion of my strength
For inside I cringe

going through the motions with a heart broken inside....love this poem. I'm looking forward to reading more from you. 5/5

It takes a minute or two to come back after that. Mesmerizing..like I was taken on a journey and couldn't escape until its finality...
Great Job

I really liked this one also ^_^ I can relate to it and understand it very well =p I love how you make the words flow together so good and put the emotions in it so good =) 5/5
Rhea

Beautiful write with great wording. 5/5

I loved it!!!! ^_____^

how i wish i could write like you...>_<
All Hail!!!!! =)

Very effective, with greatly created atmosphere and good choice of words. I like the whole rhythm if this piece, it flows excellently.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

Very Nicely Done!!!