Thats beatiful.. i know the feeling. i really liked how it didn't Rhym perfectly but is still rhymed. But i liked the message it sent for the most part.

PS. plese give me some feedback on my poems.

♥♥chelsea♥♥

I absoultely love this poem!! it is so cute.

Very cute. It really seemed to come from the heart. Really nice. :)

This is such a good poem. I love it! ~Kristy~

Good poem =)
I can relate to this one, you know me =P
I understand these feeling, very emotional and sweet
keep it up

and thanks for your comment
NemO xxxxxxxx