Dark sounds

by ShadowDancer   May 11, 2006


Screaming, crying
Laughing, dying
Sounds fill me with dread

Bleeding, hanging
Cutting, banging
All inside my head

Barking, howling
Shrieking, growling
No silence here for me

Scratching, biting
Snarling, fighting
to one to let it free

cutting, bleeding
pain now leaving
noises softening at last

numbing, freeing
darkness nearing
as i take my final repast

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Amazing work here..the flow was unstopable!!! definatly one of your best!!! keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very descriptive and well written. the structure is very good and the rhythum really ads power. the last line did not seem to finish the peice off propally... but still wasn't bad.

    overall a great eepice of writing

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Great word choice!! It put a clear image in my head!! Great poem!! Loved it!!6/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Raw.
    It was so upfront and I loved the sounds you used to describe emotion and action.
    another bril poem
    Love
    ~Em

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