Raw.
It was so upfront and I loved the sounds you used to describe emotion and action.
another bril poem
Love
~Em

Great word choice!! It put a clear image in my head!! Great poem!! Loved it!!6/5!!

Very descriptive and well written. the structure is very good and the rhythum really ads power. the last line did not seem to finish the peice off propally... but still wasn't bad.

overall a great eepice of writing

5/5

Amazing work here..the flow was unstopable!!! definatly one of your best!!! keep it up!!