Goodbye (this is for you honey)

by SaraH_*   May 11, 2006


You put your hand in the air
and then you said goodbye
but i know that you dont even care
That without you I\'ll die!

You have always been so sweet to me
and now i dont know anymore,
if its you that i really wantto see
cause i think you are gonna close the door!

That door that have always been closed
Started to open this week
Some friends wanted me to aprove
that i wa sin love for you...I have to be freak!

Be careful with his eyes
Thats what my teacher said
...black dont mean lies,
but its better if i begin to be afraid!

And that was what i have donne
but you should like to see me falling for you
...

Maybe we wont see us anymore
and this feeling makes me cry
I wish you opened the door
but in reality i wish i could die!

This is for you
Someone i wont forget
who have always been so sweet in everything you do
The one I knew i have always met!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Wow, That was really good. I love the rhyming scheme. But it's a very awesome poem you're a great writer.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    First of all. This poem doesn't deserve to be down voted! I like the emotions running in the poem, The title captured my eyes. before I even read it - I know that you wrote this from your heart. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Wow, your typo's don't seem that important anymore, if portugease (sp?) is your first language then you're doing an excellent job at this!
    I liked this poem because although it started off with a bittersweet feeling, it also held a note of hope
    well done on this piece
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    Very beautiful, love is a very hard emotion to deal with, but you will make it through, friends are there to support you and there is a man out there for you, just don't shut him out because you are trying to get over a love that wasn't even there.

    But amazing poem, I have been through the same thing, and poetry is amazing. You have amazing talent, so keep writing, I am looking foward to reading more of your writing.

    Lia Jnell

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