by Lia Jnell
Very beautiful, love is a very hard emotion to deal with, but you will make it through, friends are there to support you and there is a man out there for you, just don't shut him out because you are trying to get over a love that wasn't even there. |
by Gem
Wow, your typo's don't seem that important anymore, if portugease (sp?) is your first language then you're doing an excellent job at this! |
by Marc Ortiz
First of all. This poem doesn't deserve to be down voted! I like the emotions running in the poem, The title captured my eyes. before I even read it - I know that you wrote this from your heart. Good job! |
by Not Enough
Wow, That was really good. I love the rhyming scheme. But it's a very awesome poem you're a great writer. |