My Mask

by Cody   May 11, 2006


I put on my mask again
Everyone thinking I'm their friend
Yet despair pulls me down
I think I'm going to drown

My mask hides who I am from who I've become
This is something I'm sure you know of

I've lived a life based on lies
I am someone who you should despise
The real me watches and cries

Only I know the depth of my hate
a hate everyone helped to create
Consider me dead to you
I will be leaving soon

Some should consider this my goodbye
Other realize this is simply how I will die

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  • 18 years ago

    by Erika

    Wow that's sad... alot of feeling put into it, I was just wondering is this your feelings or based on somebody else??

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    This poem had a good meaning, and it had a lot of rhyming, and such..But the format and flow was a little off, because the structure of the poem was always changing.

    It was 4 and then 2 and yeah.

    Nice poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow that is really good.. very emotional & deep. The flow of it was really good also. You're a great writer! 5/5** Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Short, sweet and full of truth.

    I know what having a mask is like and I know those feelings inside and out, ^___^ well done, this is well written and very well stated =]

    and

    one day early but!

    HAPPY B-DAY

    =]
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by MidNightBeauty

    Wow i love this poem its great it like connected with how i act towards things..i dont know if that makes sence to you..but anyway love ya

    heather

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