Hey cody
this is a great poem i can soo relate it is like that for me sometimes to just wake up and put on ur smile and not let anyone see wat is really going on behide it... u feel as though u are just living for everyone esle and not urself
it is crazy but u have to just think past it and find "the light" i know that sounds corny but sometime "the light" can be something or someone or even just looking inside ur heart u can find something that helps
anyways keep up the good work
take care
xoxo
robyn
ps. i have a new poem come and read when u have the time :)

I really like this poem!
~*~ not loved ~*~

Wow i love this poem its great it like connected with how i act towards things..i dont know if that makes sence to you..but anyway love ya

heather

Short, sweet and full of truth.

I know what having a mask is like and I know those feelings inside and out, ^___^ well done, this is well written and very well stated =]

and

one day early but!

HAPPY B-DAY

=]
Jenn

Wow that is really good.. very emotional & deep. The flow of it was really good also. You're a great writer! 5/5** Keep it up!

This poem had a good meaning, and it had a lot of rhyming, and such..But the format and flow was a little off, because the structure of the poem was always changing.

It was 4 and then 2 and yeah.

Nice poem.

Wow that's sad... alot of feeling put into it, I was just wondering is this your feelings or based on somebody else??