Wow...i luved it....you make a good team. It was so seamless if you hadnt had said it was by three of you I wouldnt have know. Each of you brought something unique to it but it worked together so well....woweee....

[lost_laureate]

Nice job, You can do more with imagery and the flow. Keep it up

That was awsome! I loved every line of it! You must have all had fun writting that together! it was great! 5/5

Great work... the way the stanzas were split between the three of you made the poem so much more challenging. You all did a wonderful job in keeping the flow of the poem while throwing in a bit of each writer's own style. Great work! 5/5

Gr8 poem u guyz! love it!

Great poem....its amazing how ya do it like that..everyone keep up the good work

I love it too!!:D

That was awesome, i love how there were three poets in the making of that... me and some friends should try that sometime... good job guys!

**meggie**

Aww...that was sad...
To make u feel that way they must have really hurt you...
Yet again..the words are so intruiging!!

Jen

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