by J Lau
I like the tone of this poem... matches the title perfectly and sets a fun, light tone. The flow was a little choppy but gives the reader a sense of "dancing" and "playful" impression, so it works well. Good write. 5/5 |
Wow, gr8 poem. that was crammed full of details! WOW! 5/5 |
by Natalie
This was cool. I like puddles too =p tehe. But this was really done well, It really sounded.. Pretty? Lol.. Well I thought so. Keep up the great work! 5/5 |
by Darien
The rhymes were really good in this poem. It was filled with a lot of imagery. Very calming. A good write. |
by Jessica
Aww.. haha! i liked that! :) it was very descriptive and it made me laff.. i dont kno y tho :P haha.. keep it up! |
by Renea
Good poem it made me laugh very nice, it is a change for what i usually read, Keep up the great work and ty for ur comments about mine. |
by Megann Lee
Haha. That's so cute, and true. You're NEVER to old to jump in puddles. :D |
by Sondos
I liked this- but felt you could work a bit more on the great subject matters and ideas you've got. One way of doing this could be the rhyme which although was great in some places often sounded just a little forced. Sometimes you don't have/can't rhyme to get the right effect. Nevertheless this was a very good poem and i like the ambiguity of the last line. Good Work |
This poem is really good, I love the rain, and every poem that talks about rain. I liked how you related raining with happiness and fun. |
by tyanna
Great poem..reminded me of being a little kid..but I never got to play in the rain...sigh...My favorite part was "But the clouds were to busy taking a leak"..That line made me laugh..Nice touch..5/5 |
by Kayla
Awesome poem girl! It's so good-spirted, it makes people realize that rainy days aren't that terrible. You made this poem funny in some parts, like the,"But the clouds were to busy taking a leak" hehe, nice work!! 5/5 <3 |