by Diabolic Atrocity May 11, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Sun, moon, celestial orbit |
Aww.. this is reallly good.. depressing but still a really enjoyable read... the emotion was strong and the flow was beautiful... good work :] |
I really loved the rhyming in this. It was absolutely wonderful. Great job! 5/5 |
This was well written. Your message was very clear, and I liked the imagery and metaphor of the solar system. Keep it up! |