Comments : Alone

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This was well written. Your message was very clear, and I liked the imagery and metaphor of the solar system. Keep it up!

  • I really loved the rhyming in this. It was absolutely wonderful. Great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is reallly good.. depressing but still a really enjoyable read... the emotion was strong and the flow was beautiful... good work :]