by Raychel May 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You're the chains that I must break, |
I absolutely loved this poem...its one of my favorites!grrt job i loved the tide/wave/wind stanzas...it was amazing... good job and i hope to see more like this in the future!.... |
by Matthew A.
Very deep...but good...nice flow and choice of words..and as i promised..i will read more of yours soon...lay.. |