Dust Imprisoned Angel

by Brigitte   May 11, 2006


Frozen forever in one stance
A child’s play thing at one glance
No one knows of the secrets she holds
A time capsule of dreams untold

Time and love hath withered her appearance
A tiny angel once bought on clearance
But behind her mysteriously beautiful smile
Lies the undying love of a child

Golden locks of bouncy curls
Have aged to the color of pearls
And her dress, made of lace
Lies tattered from a child’s embrace

Her crystal eyes have turned to gray
But behind them lies no dismay
Her lips remain pursed tight
Holding trusted secrets with all her might

Years have passed and still she stands
Ready to play on command
A time-worn doll filled with love
A dust imprisoned angel sent from above

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  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    This is really well written I thought it made a lot of sense. The flow and structure was well done. A very good read in deed. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    Awesome poem u have a real talent 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ Lol. It took me a while to get it, but as soon as you said the doll at the end I got it. Lol. I'm a bit slow ;) 5/5 +.+

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    I don't know how I could explain my feelings of this poem here...I mean its so good I am truly left speechless...my fave line is "
    A time-worn doll filled with love
    A dust imprisoned angel sent from above"
    its just so deep adn touching...{5/5}

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    Wow-this really was something. It flowed perfectly and had such a beautiful subject matter. I love it. Honest! Its ooh your descriptions, metophors and deep thought processes are very admirable

    Sondos

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