Pretty :) Really enjoyed reading this, it's so original, pretty obscure too. How did you get the idea? Great stuff though anyway, it flowed really nicely. 5/5 =D x

Righty dear. Your poems are getting stranger......

lOVE THEM THO!!!

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Another jaw dropping idea. your such and amazing writer becuase the language you use is soo meaningful and real. unlike most people on this site who have no vocabulary or descriptie skill. AND aswell as that, you come up with these ideas that are soo beautiful they should be cliqued but thier not. becuase no one else has ever thought of them
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