Worthless or Not?

by Rosie   May 11, 2006


Im sitting here, I'm so depressed
My morning was good but not the rest
My head hurts, I'm in deep thoughts
So emotional it's beginning to hurt.

Trying so hard to please everyone
But all my work seems to come undone
Tell me now, am I wasting my time?
If I carry on, will they continue to whine?

My boyfriend is the one who makes me see
The most important person here is me
I've got to start thinking about what I need
Otherwise I have no chance to succeed

I want to start fresh, I want to be free
To have my own family and finally be happy
To give my children the life I never had
To make sure they're smiling and are never sad

I'm trying my best I wont ever quit
And what I'll get in return is the best bit
Coz I'm a winner and I'll fight on
I'll fight for whats right and not for whats wrong

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Hmm very well done Rosie. I've missed your poems! Glad you added a new one.

    The first stanza was very mysterious. Made me wonder; "what happened?" So that kept my attention through the whole poem. Very fantastic.

    I love how you talk about having a family, and give your children the life you never had. Very powerfull and very sad.

    The part where you say you need to think about what you need, other wise you have no chance to succeed"
    That's very strong, so much beneath the surface. Holds a lot of meaning.

    But so does this whole poem.

    I loved it alot Rosie. Happy to read a new poem of yours =)

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

    Ps; thank you so much for your support and all the sweet comments you always leave on my poems. My poems just do not feel finished without your sweet comments =)
    So thank you so much

    LOVE YOU!

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