Hmm very well done Rosie. I've missed your poems! Glad you added a new one.

The first stanza was very mysterious. Made me wonder; "what happened?" So that kept my attention through the whole poem. Very fantastic.

I love how you talk about having a family, and give your children the life you never had. Very powerfull and very sad.

The part where you say you need to think about what you need, other wise you have no chance to succeed"
That's very strong, so much beneath the surface. Holds a lot of meaning.

But so does this whole poem.

I loved it alot Rosie. Happy to read a new poem of yours =)

Lotsaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Ps; thank you so much for your support and all the sweet comments you always leave on my poems. My poems just do not feel finished without your sweet comments =)
So thank you so much

LOVE YOU!