Simile Poem:Sun vs. Moon

by ~**Sweetpea**~   May 11, 2006


The sun is like a desert,
Hot, shiny, and mysterious.
The moon is like a dessert,
Quiet, cold, and gentle

The sun is burning,
And anxious to be heard.
The sun is as noisy as
The beeping of hospital machines.

The moon is scared,
And nervous about life.
The moon is as silent as
A flutter of butterfly wings.

My heart begs for the sun,
But knows the moon holds my secrets.

There u go andrew i wrote u one! Have a nice day!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Reflection | noitcelfeR

    Oooh!!! ^.^ i like it.... tee hee, hospital machines, you might want to find something else to put there, but it was good!!! keep it up