This is a dark/sad poem=( But it has strong feeling to it and expression, you must have been really depressed when u wrote this. By the way thank you so much for the topic you gave me i already have ideas flowing thriugh my mind=) if you wanna talk, tell me

Wow.. intense. Really dark and weird.. but that's okay, because I looove dark weird poems! Haha. It was really great!

Amazing poem!
I'll be adding you to my favorites!

Keep writing!
Cayce

I thought this was constructed and worded smartly with a constant flow..I loved the repetition of Death...Somehow brought me chills..

Keep writing..:-)