Look Into My Broken Soul

by elly   May 11, 2006


Look deep inside me
Look into my eyes
Find out what's wrong with me
Look at these twisted lies

Look deep inside my tired eyes
Find out what's wrong with me
Wash away all these carried lies
Look deep down, and see

See how rotten, and broken my soul is
Breathe in all my sorrow, my pain
Feel all the times my heart broke
Understand my soul has been slain

Look into my broken soul
And try to piece it back
Just put in a few more holes
Then fill them up with what I lack

----Yes, another oldie. About a half a year ago. Maybe less, I'm not sure. As I've said before, please let me know what you thought about this, good or bad. Thank you for taking the time to read this. ---

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Tiernan

    I really liked this keep it up and maybe check out some of mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Holly

    Wicked good job! I liked it a lot. Sounds like the way I feel all the damn time!