If you were here

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   May 11, 2006


If you were here i would say all the words that i had left unspoken.The day you said good bye i said i hope you choke on your words and with a sigh i thought to myself you will come back but looking back i wish i had tried.But if you were i would let the words just spill out as if i was singing a song i would scream out why did you go i should have said no wont you come back would you even care but if you were here i would dare just one last time to tell you what i feel inside but theres no chance your with her now so i just take one last glance and as i sit and cry i know i have lost my chance.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Nice expressing ur emotions here and i'd love the metaphor its kinda unique and very worded feelings.. its not ur best but it was good thoughts.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    It's very emotionally deep, and an extreamly good read. But if you seperated your paragraph into stanza's and punctuation it would make for a better poem/ read.
    You have a talent,so help it.
    Elaine

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This is very good. i know the feeling. im going through this now... i love ur work, keep it up.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    I love this poem 2 death it is on my favs!hehe

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    This is powerfull, but I agree with the others, maybe put some stanza's in it.. =]
    4/5

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