I loved this poem it was really nice. Yet sad. It made me think. I loved your "user name" to, "a beatiful mistake". It is very unique and I like it.

Well, it was okay, i find it hard to read because basically if it was written in stanza's and had some punctuation it would flow better, it just seemed like a big blob to me. hope this helps
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Very expressive. i would suggest breaking it up slightly, as being in a solid chunk as it is can make the reading slightly difficult and dunting.... other wise a fantastic peice, very expressive with soome excelent content

Nice...cute...expressive

Very well..i loved the way you expressed it. If it was stanza manner could have been a lot better. But keep it up.

I read your profile and your about me and you said that you express your feelings through your poetry and you said they might suck. i have to disagree with you. this poem is very expressive and emotional. I would give this poem a 10/10. you have a way with words. keep up the good work. amazing job

lots of love
hayley

There is much emotion and passion in your piece. I have trouble with run on poems without punctuation. I wonder why so many people on here write about cutting yourself.

This is a great poem. So many emotions were expressed in here! I can relate... well anyways it really was a cool poem 5/5!

Your poem was very emotional, I could imagin it as it happened, its inspiring. If you feel the need you can read one of mine. Thanks, Cheyanne

Really great poem!!

This is really good i give it a 5 it might be a little easier to read if u broke it up though but the words are perfect nice work!
*kaila

I love u pome

Very nice.The flow wasn't as smooth as it could've been but,I liked it.4/5

<3Amber

I liked this very much..i usually dont like things that arnt wirrtin in poem form. but this was touching. i know the feeling..5/5

Expressive.
I enjoyed it.
May I suggest if you broke it up into stanza's and added punctuation it would flow a bit better with the hearfelt meaning you laced through this peice.
Still enjoyable,
Keep it up,
Elaine.

Great poem!!!!!! i loved it... great flow ,intense it waz really good!