I like it, its well written and very heartfelt. Good job, keep it up. And thanks for your comment on mine. :-)

I LOVED IT IT WAAS REALLY GOOD. KEEP IT UP. PLEASE COMMENT ON MINE.

Well its written so well very great.... i want ur poems

Oh wow this was good...very well written. good job

thank you for the comment on my poem :)

Hey beautiful peom, i really feel so much emotion from this poem, well done!
Love Mel

Yo that fire. I like that one as well. lol Ya last verse well you know the last part was real nice.

I think its really good!!!!
i love the emotion you put into it
very good i loved it

- Nikki