by blade_rush (Justin) May 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Why do you not love me? |
It was good. Not mind blowing or anything like that. Also in the third stanza you forgot a word in front of flash, in case you care. It'll have a better flow for that line then. But overall this was something that kept interest and didn't get all wordy. The last stanza was really cool. |
by Kayla
Ahhhhhhhh thta is so cute i really like it |
I Like this . its so good.. Don't worry. Love will find you. I lost the one I love to. and I still love him after a year and a few months. Good luck |