This was a very touching poem. Oh man, rhyming right with right.. GENIOUS! lol, I'm not making fun, I'm just trying to make you laugh :)
This was a good poem, and your mom would love it.

Cayce, you have a heart of gold. This is beautiful!

Awww..that was adorable! i KNOW your mom would adore it! :) keep it up!
jessy

Awwww...touched my heart....very sweetly written and at first I found it a very sad poem but in the ending there was hope. It wasnt 'technically' amazing but the message really clinched it for me and thats what counts...

[lost_laureate - come find me]

Awww

It's a really good poem. I didn't write my mom a poem, but I got her a bird in a nest sitting on two eggs. I am one egg, and my twin sister is the other. As for my brother, he's a year older and has already flwon the coop.

Nice poem!!!!

Nice poem!!!!

By far one of the best tributes to mother's for Mother's Day. This was a really good write. Good stuff :)