Ice Burn

by Wings Of Flames   May 12, 2006


Grass dancing in the breeze,
Golden tinge from the sun,
Crystal water springs,
Where the warm nights had begun,

Bleached skin in the waves,
The salty, sandy fumes,
Glazed stars in the water,
To take away the glooms,

Petals shake in the air,
Of the warmth and the green,
Colours of a rainbow,
Like nothing you've ever seen,

Sun beating down,
Encouraging us to grow,
To love and to cherish,
Of things we should always know,

Orange dressing stars,
And shoot onto the ground,
The battle has begun,
But without a sound,

Fallen Reddened soldiers,
Cut from their homey fire,
The warmth then bitter cold,
Lost of all desire,

Crystalised the lake,
With a finger print,
Stripped the girls of clothing,
And killed the cloves of mint,

Sprayed the dew of morn',
Onto the window pane,
Then sprinkled over silver,
In the Winter rain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Yes! I agree with everyone about this one.... absolutely beautiful. Amazing imagery. You have such a way with words that no matter what you're writing about, it's as if we're flying... If you know what I mean... Honestly I'm not quite sure what that meant but take it as a compliment ;) lol. Thats how I feel when I read your poems, especially this one.
    Sarah-Joy

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    It's so beautiful. it's just...... gorgeous. the imagery uis so pretty but teh words are so dark. amazing....
    love suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Hehe this ones enterd in my contest....

    so i will not comment......

    YET

    ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    What a great poem! I think this may be my first about nature poem ive ever read, and I must say, it surprised me in a positive way.

    Excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Love, i think its one of the best, if not, the best nature poem i've read. you painted a wonderful picture, with your use of great wording, (as usual i might add, lol.). well, i'm off, enjoy yourself. bye bye

    Brad

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